Our posting has become more sporadic as our lives have increased in business. I’m working to rededicate myself to posting regularly. We have the first five chapters written as a rough draft and are currently going back through them. We are editing and correcting a few mistakes as well as make sure we are doing the characters correctly. It’s an interesting process, although very challenging. My wife had a chance to read the first four chapters (before we had really gone back over them) and she provided us some valuable feedback. I’ll give her a chance to write out her thoughts below:
"I have had a chance to read the first few chapters of the story Pratt and Lio are working on, and enjoyed it very much (I keep bugging them to finish the next chapter so I can read it, but they’re currently too busy polishing the first few chapters). The crew of Maso’s Trick is especially fun and it’s easy to get attached to them. I also have something of a love/hate relationship with Mateus, because he’s very interesting and yet so freaking evil.
Because these chapters are still in progress, there were a few things that needed clarification or additional details (which is why Lio and Pratt are going over them again), but the overall story is good. It certainly managed to keep my attention, and anyone who knows me will attest to what an accomplishment that is. I can’t wait for more! *nudge nudge*"
-Pratt and Je-Vé Despain
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